Some people think studying alone is the best way for students to have better future. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?
Education has become increasingly important in many countries around the world. While studying alone is believed is the best way for knowledge seekers, I personally believe that other factors are equally important.
There is a main reason why studying by oneself is the optimal choice to most of public opinion, which helps concentrate on studying better. From this aspect at issue, having own private space because of no distraction and disturbance from others, which is the way helps pay comprehensive attention on learning, leads to achieve higher academic results at school . Besides, fostering personal growth is also gained from seeking knowledge by oneself. Due to challenging as well deal with problems by themselves, soft skills such as problem-solving could be enhanced. It is clear about not only can one improve scores but one also applies for seeking for well-paid employment or climbing up to the career ladder.
Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as studying alone such as studying in group. The first benefit from this way of studying is motivation. Which means whenever studying with highly qualified people who may also the seeker’s role model, one has rationale to pursue one’s studying. Thanks to the partners’ tutorial, one’s own faults are easily recognized and one can be transmitted knowledge. Knowledge seekers in group, therefore, enhance themselves to take know-how in. Moreover, the more people one studies with, the more ideas one gets from others in the same time; due to members not only gets new opinions in short-time, they also gain a huge of understanding.
In conclusion, while studying alone is the optimal choice for most of people, I do not believe that it outweighs all other ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30035335689 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95133443134 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621908127208 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3653204809 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146746194878 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529645174134 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506897072734 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103407924656 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229857954904 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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