Some people believe money is a less important factor than free time for quality of life. What do you think about it? What other factors are necessary to live a good quality of lifestyle?
Quality of life is directly depend to the how a person is satisfied with his life and since the satisfaction feeling deeply is related to different factors, the good quality of life may be varied from one to one. There are several ideology about life aims all around the world according to people ideology, religious, society situation and personal life. Among them, there are 2 main group which have conflict on role of money and free time in quality of life. In my point of view, more free time to spend on my interest is more significant to be satisfied and happy with my life. On the other hand, nowadays, money is a critical factor in determining people’s live quality. Following paragraph are discussed these issue.
As human is a social animal, they tend to have activities in order to communicate with other people. In fact these kind of activities are enjoyable for them. Also, they keen on to spend more time with their family members and close friends. According to psychological studies, people will get more happiness when they have more free time to do what they want. Some people enjoy reading book while somebody like to spend more time with their friends.
On the other side, there is a large number of people who believe that money can bring them every things that they need, so they will be happy and have a good life. It’s clear that money can provide a wide range of facilities and result in more satisfaction. Obviously money is able to improve the people situation in various ways. As an outstanding instance, people can educate in recognized university and after graduation the chance to get a high paid job is increased.
One important thing that should be stuck in mind, is about a considerable number of wealthy people that aren’t satisfied with their life. As a contradictory case, I can refer to kate spade, who was a famous fashion designer that has suicided some months age. She was a successful woman that has every things, but she didn’t feel good. So, satisfaction is a significant actor to be happy.
As a conclusion, it’s very clear that money can facilitate the life and improve the quality of people live, but being happy and having satisfaction is depended to personal ideology and related to what people want in their life.
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Suggestion: several ideologies
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Suggestion: groups
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83037974684 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6196477011 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6307411238 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283077238774 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773500962673 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632439042256 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153294740617 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659872754488 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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