The diagram shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk cloth?

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The diagram shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk cloth?

The given layout chart reveals the information about the life cycle of the Silkworm, and the process of production of the Silk cloth with different working stages. Which is the clearly add cohrently represented.
It can be seen that there are four step of life cycle of the silkworm ; from eggs to adult moth and process of silk production involve in different work stages from silkworm cocoon to Silk material.
It is crystal and clearly from diagram, that is first stage of life cycle Silkworm has eggs to Silkworm larva, it become with in 10 working days from eggs to silleworm larva afterthat, second step silleworm change to Silk thread has been working with 4-6 week finally 3-8 working days become from Silk thread to properly cocoon.
As far as trend is concerned that, different six working stages process of silk cloth production firstly, cocoon is select and then, boiling water after the boiling it become cocoon to thread moreover, twist and weave stages can be processed the thread can be dyed, and then Silk thread has been changed in cloth after then, complete cloth production.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lk cloth with different working stages. Which is the clearly add cohrently represente...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
...ed. It can be seen that there are four step of life cycle of the silkworm ; from eg...
^^^^
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
...ed. It can be seen that there are four step of life cycle of the silkworm ; from eg...
^^^^
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...Silkworm has eggs to Silkworm larva, it become with in 10 working days from eggs to si...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...hen, boiling water after the boiling it become cocoon to thread moreover, twist and we...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89784946237 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33456607263 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.761531843 43.030603864 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.2 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 22.9334400587 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375555802157 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210535042058 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122581332548 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251513275461 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614990367387 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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