The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives some data about the number of underground station users in London from 6.00 a.m to 22.00 p.m. As is observed, the most popular time to use the Tube is around 7.30 a.m and 18 p.m.
According to the graph, the number of subway passengers increases rapidly from 100 people at 6.00 a.m untill 7.30 a.m, when it reaches its maximum of 400 people. The same trend can be observed in the period from 4.00 p.m. to 18.00 p.m. From 10 a.m. to 14 p.m. the nummer of passengers goes up with considerable fluctations from about 160 to 300. Then, after 14 p.m. to 16 p.m. there is a significant decline from 300 to 100 people.
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- With the rise in popularity of the Internet, newspapers will soon become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...t popular time to use the Tube is around 7.30 a.m and 18 p.m. According to the g...
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....00 a.m untill 7.30 a.m, when it reaches its maximum of 400 people. The same tren...
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...4.00 p.m. to 18.00 p.m. From 10 a.m. to 14 p.m. the nummer of passengers goes up...
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... considerable fluctations from about 160 to 300. Then, after 14 p.m. to 16 p.m. t...
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...ificant decline from 300 to 100 people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 517.0 965.302439024 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 119.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34453781513 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30283395202 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28898678242 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 135.9 283.868780488 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.338150188 43.030603864 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.333333333 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.6666666667 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102559331191 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573306968744 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066005774819 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959917952106 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408934411476 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 11.4329268293 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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