Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend?
These days, the masses lead the lifestyle that suits their personality best. Some people thus opt for living in solitude because they consider this method the best way to achieve independence. This essay aims to investigate the mentioned view and then present the chief reasons why it is a negative trend.
One aspect which many people assert justifies solitary life can be identified as independence. When people live alone, they do not have to tolerate other’s opinion, and live their lives according to their expectation or rely on them, allowing these individuals to lean on their own competency and follow their interest. A paper published by John Doe, a world-renowned psychologist, reveals that an overwhelming majority of younger generation tend to live alone to relieve themselves from parents’ pressure and to follow their own dream. While this explanation seems irrefutable, there are some thoughts that suggest this developing trend is detrimental.
Another angle of thoughts on this lifestyle illustrates it is a negative development. Firstly, it is dangerous to live alone due to the fact that no one would be present if some incident were to occur. My late uncle, for instance, was living alone when he had a stroke, and because he did not have a helping hand, unable to call the emergency, he passed away. Moreover, living alone might cause social destitution. This is because when people are alone, their interpersonal skills will not develop, thereby preventing them from being able to interact naturally with others, which in turn leaves them socially destitute. Statistics of a study conducted by the Yale University, for example, acknowledge more than 73 percent of young professionals who live by themselves find it difficult to befriend with their colleagues. This highlights the detrimental outcome of living alone.
All in all, even though it is clear that people have a tendency to pursue independence by living alone, this trend has detrimental outcomes such as endangering one’s life or deteriorating effect on one’s social life, which render it a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33035714286 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00685247014 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6465282149 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170286305333 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554166962832 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328271638012 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105860126212 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106030054043 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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