The diagram show the stage and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ment making and the second diagram shows show the how cement is used to produce ...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
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Suggestion: how
...king and the second diagram shows show the how cement is used to produce the concrete ...
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...g and the second diagram shows show the how cement is used to produce the concre...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...sed to produce the concrete for building It can be seen that cement is made by us...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...t is made by using two main raw material , and the manufacturing process consist o...
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Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e distinct stage to production of cement . At the first stage of production of ...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...and clay are together put into a crusher .It helps to break down the raw materials...
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...d clay are together put into a crusher .It helps to break down the raw materials i...
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Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...down the raw materials into small pieces . Next, this crushed material introduce t...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
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Suggestion: mixed; mixt
...the mixer limestone and clay are easily mix with each other .Further the mixture of...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... and clay are easily mix with each other .Further the mixture of limestone and cla...
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Suggestion: Further
...nd clay are easily mix with each other .Further the mixture of limestone and clay are s...
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...d clay are sent into the rotating heater .In this step the material is rotate an...
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...clay are sent into the rotating heater .In this step the material is rotate and ...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e sent into the rotating heater .In this step the material is rotate and we are ...
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Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: rotated
... heater .In this step the material is rotate and we are also provide the external he...
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Line 6, column 27, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
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Suggestion: provided
...the material is rotate and we are also provide the external heat .After that ,It shift...
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Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...nd we are also provide the external heat .After that ,It shift into grinder and fi...
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... we are also provide the external heat .After that ,It shift into grinder and finally...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...so provide the external heat .After that ,It shift into grinder and finally cement...
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...ovide the external heat .After that ,It shift into grinder and finally cement is read...
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Line 8, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...nd, to produce the concrete for building . There are some required amount of the m...
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Line 8, column 83, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
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Suggestion: amounts
... for building . There are some required amount of the material which are used to produ...
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Line 8, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...erial which are used to produce concrete , 10% water , 15 % cement , sand 25% and ...
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Line 8, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...are used to produce concrete , 10% water , 15 % cement , sand 25% and 50% grave in...
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Line 8, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...oduce concrete , 10% water , 15 % cement , sand 25% and 50% grave into concrete mi...
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Line 8, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...nd 25% and 50% grave into concrete mixer .This mixer is rotate into clock wise di...
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... 25% and 50% grave into concrete mixer .This mixer is rotate into clock wise direct...
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...0% grave into concrete mixer .This mixer is rotate into clock wise direction whic...
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Line 8, column 228, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: rotated
...ave into concrete mixer .This mixer is rotate into clock wise direction which help to...
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Suggestion: .
...ial easily and concrete is ready for use .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77669902913 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26128855433 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.174938873 43.030603864 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 164.0 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3333333333 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 31.0 1.69756097561 1826% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392072473105 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199354691079 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21055177911 0.0843802449381 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260540606196 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228017096256 0.0819641961636 278% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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