It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views.
It is true that some person seems more talent than others in certain aspect, the reason of which has been discussed for long time. Some people believe that talents are acquired in genes, whereas others argue that through training, any child can master certain skills.
To begin with, supporters for the nature talent view believe that the abilities and senses possessed by someone in born maybe the skills that others struggling to learn and practice through out their lives. Generally, It is not unusual to see a child without professional training performing extremely well in some aspects from a...
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not.However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views. 93
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace.Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake 64
Sentence: But we should guide a child to develop toward his interesting aspect, only by this way he can make an extraodinary succeed, otherwise, he will be bored by what he is learning.
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Suggestion: Refer to extraodinary and succeed
Sentence: In conclusion, talents are the combination of personal interesting and continuous training.
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Sentence: So, everyone is unique in biologic, resulting different abilities and adapting aspects
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Sentence: But we should guide a child to develop toward his interesting aspect, only by this way he can make an extraodinary succeed, otherwise, he will be bored by what he is learning.
Error: extraodinary Suggestion: extraordinary
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