The given circular charts compare the total expenditure of five different amounts for Uk school in three years:1981,1991 and 2001.The data is calibrated in percentum which is clear and coherent representation.
Firstly,as is observed in the given pie charts , the school spent an increasing percentage of money on teachers' salaries which was highest in the year 1991 was 50% , after which it was reduced by 5% in 2001.Moreover, in case of other workers' salaries, the spending was significantly declined over the years with 28% ,22% and 15% in 1981, 1991 and 2001 respectively.
Furthermore, in case of resources like books the proportion spent on these also decreased after a slight increase of 5% in 1991 , and the expenditure was made on furniture and equipment which was also declined from 15% to 5% in the first two years: 1981 and 1991, then increase in the next year 2001 was 23% . Finally, the smallest percentum of annual spending was on insurance over the two decades was decreased in 1981 and 2001 which was 2% and 8% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that insurance and teacher salary was gradually increases , while others worker salary decreased and rest to fluctuated.
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- The given circular charts compare the total expenditure of five different amounts for Uk school in three years:1981,1991 and 2001.The data is calibrated in percentum which is clear and coherent representation. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92121212121 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84868694332 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569696969697 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4227257882 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.0 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 22.9334400587 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.25 5.23603664747 349% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138923325395 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876859427249 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054104872005 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905506580364 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645263402625 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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