Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has techonology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or nagative development?
There is no doubt that the advance of technology has contributed significantly to people in the modern life. In fact, this practice also leads to a change in the ways people interact with family, friends and colleagues... In this essay, I will explore some main ways in which people's relationships has been influenced by technology as well as both sides of this effects.
One significant way is that people nowadays frequently contact with other thruogh mobile phones and the internet rather than traditional means, such as letters. The options are many: facebook, viber, yahoo messenger and othe...
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Sentence: In fact, this practice also leads to a change in the ways people interact with family, friends and colleagues... In this essay, I will explore some main ways in which people's relationships has been influenced by technology as well as both sides of this effects.
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Sentence: One significant way is that people nowadays frequently contact with other thruogh mobile phones and the internet rather than traditional means, such as letters.
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