Essay topics: In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married,some people believe that this because women are able to earn own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring to. What do you agree or disagree
Firstly: education is the biggest reason , so women think no need of marriage in life, because women earn the good pay for fulfil of their daily need. They do not depend the male.for instance, some year ago female are not educated. they do work only at home ,and also they take some money form his spouse, they are totally depended on his life partner. but nowadays advancement of technology female gain higher knowledge about the flora or founa . moving further:, women loss there freedom after marriage, because they believe that after marriage, when they go outside firstly give the permission own his in-laws family , also tell the all “situation or why”. so in 21 centuries women think that marriages no necessary in life.
Second: after the marriage the many extra responsibilities occurs on shoulder . Some related to home,relationships ,and depend on emotion.female belive that marriage life so difficult or complicated. ”ahed”: today living relationship is also popular in my society , both gender feel the all emotions, before marriage they share all the personal or phlysical thing .so women do not believe in marriage.
Overall: the today women are self sufficient “it is good” but marriage is lovely relationships not a diaster. during the marriage people celebrate the own traditions or more cermany.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33018867925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03075894757 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6274678003 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.727272727 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188391828635 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758582120986 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524562445216 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128897337781 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224601827294 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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