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Was a fight really essential in the first place which not only affects the concerned parties but the people in the other parts of the World?
With the good amount of journalism we currently have, it seems we are inundated with news stories that leave an impact upon us. The recent news about the chemical weapon attack in Syria pains me a lot. Seeing the scourge of people dying and mutilated by the chemical weapons that were unleashed was very disconcerting to watch.
People irrespective of their religion, cast or creed need to be treated equally and fairly. Constructive dialogue needs to be initiated within different sects to avoid such horrific acts. In this era, where technology has surpassed everybody’s expectations, it shoul...
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- Was a fight really essential in the first place which not only affects the concerned parties but the people in the other parts of the World? 90
- Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked What are some of the problems of tourism 68
- You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, 100
- In some rich countries the number of children at secondary or high school who are taking science subjects in declining What effect might this have on the children s and their countries futures How can children be encouraged to study science 73
- You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post. 75
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