The table below gives information about favourites pastimes in. Different countries in percentages.
The given tabular charts depicts the information about the seven past time activities were performed by age 30-50 in eight nation .the data is callibrated in percentum.which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that japan only nation,which is perform in reading activities as well as sleep activities done by few people.
It can be seen that,in first four countries the Canada and Australia are most prefer to watch the tv ,and France and England most read the book that is 30 per centage.england has also higher in sleep activities.music activities like by only minor people that is less than 5 percentum. In the sport activities are like by Canada and Australia that more than one fifth or less than aa third.
It is crystal clear, next four countries people are perform past time activities.the japan masses only read the book which is more than three fifth ,and also Korea or China people prefer as it is japan people. All. Countries person minor focus on sleep activities. Most people are doing the hobbies perform that is less than half or more than 50.
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- The graph below compare figures for production and consumption of energy in the us from 1950 to 2000.it also predict the figures of 2025. 73
- Some people believe that playing a msusical instrument can be beneficial in many different way other think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument . Discuss both view and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...depicts the information about the seven past time activities were performed by age 30-50 ...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e performed by age 30-50 in eight nation .the data is callibrated in percentum.whi...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ll, it is evident that japan only nation,which is perform in reading activities as wel...
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Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'performed'.
Suggestion: performed
...evident that japan only nation,which is perform in reading activities as well as sleep ...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...done by few people. It can be seen that,in first four countries the Canada and Aus...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ustralia are most prefer to watch the tv ,and France and England most read the boo...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... next four countries people are perform past time activities.the japan masses only read t...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the book which is more than three fifth ,and also Korea or China people prefer as...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities. Most people are doing the hobbies perform that is less than half or more t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88648648649 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78126887187 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551351351351 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8981543362 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580781914059 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299765793727 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285683611181 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354924910038 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232611537906 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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