You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The following bar chart gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Wri

The bar graph illustrated the comparison between four characteristics with five countries (Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia and USA).

According to the graph, the highest feature was GNP per head in USA with significant increasing compering with another countries it is value was 13000 dollar approximately per head, however this feature in Bolivia, Egypt and Indonesia have slight increasing and equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh is the lowest county in this feature.

In addition to, calorie supply per person it is can be clearly seen that USA and Egypt have a sharp incensing (3500, 3000 calories per head respectively). Whereas, the Bangladesh was the lowest country, also Bolivia and Indonesia have approximately equal value (2100, 2000 calories per head respectively).

In conclusion , the USA is the first one in all feature compering between another countries, and the second is Egypt. There are no significant different in another three countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...another countries it is value was 13000 dollar approximately per head, however this fe...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...creasing and equal value approximately. Also the Bangladesh is the lowest county in ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... per head respectively. In conclusion , the USA is the first one in all feature...
^^
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t different in another three countries.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57718120805 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04529509608 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2870025649 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610656246223 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357828843224 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256955777675 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0473759553037 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287767584206 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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