some of people think that we should not exploit animals and animals should have the same rights as human, while others think that human should have to exploit animals for a lot of purposes such as food or research.
firstly, animals are our friends because they live and grow up with us. when you feel sad or stress, we can talk to our pet everything and make us feel relax, especially in modern society where we have a lot of problems in life such as work, money, love.... in some emergency case, animals can save our life. a lot of news about dogs saved their owners from drown or heart attack. we all know that dog is very loyal, when their owners died, they often sad or even skip their meals. in addition, animals like dog, bird can take care of our house, prevent the thiefs or strange person
but human often use animals to eat or get their leathers to make clothes. animal meat have a lot of nutrients and people are used to eat animal meats.
i think we should stop exploit animals because we can change meat from animals to mushrooms which have a lot nutrients
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, while, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42713567839 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0177866195 2.80592935109 72% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0911955856 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35797257959 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150266326407 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140340260882 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259419872189 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149286161151 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 78.4519038076 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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