The line graph depicts the number of transportation modes (road,water,rail and pipeline)which were used in the UK over 28 years period from 1974 to 2002. Units are measured in million tonnes.
overall,the road used widely for carrying commodities to the UK , whereas pipeline was least used as a transportation mode but it demonstrates steady increase during the given period, whilst water and rail system went up in the same year.
Initially, around 70 million tonnes of goods were transported to the UK via road after which it swelled and at the end of the period it was just below 100 million tonnes.one of the most striking feature of the graph is, both water and rail system carried same amount of commodities 40 million tonnes in 1978 and these two transportation system witnessed a steady increase from 1982 to 2002.
pipeline showed the same trend despite the figure of goods carried roughly slower than water transport.Pipeline media only moved about 2 million tonnes in 1974 to about 21 million tonnes in 2002.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
... the number of transportation modes road,water,rail and pipelinewhich were used in the...
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Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...rom 1974 to 2002. Units are measured in million tonnes. overall,the road used widely...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...nits are measured in million tonnes. overall,the road used widely for carrying commo...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...e measured in million tonnes. overall,the road used widely for carrying commoditi...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...idely for carrying commodities to the UK , whereas pipeline was least used as a tr...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pipeline
...a steady increase from 1982 to 2002. pipeline showed the same trend despite the figur...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Pipeline
...ied roughly slower than water transport.Pipeline media only moved about 2 million tonnes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00584795322 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91598603921 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.33845846 43.030603864 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.2 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 22.9334400587 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143522248044 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805325506838 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496632175789 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972414536939 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282339207728 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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