Being a celebrity such as film star or sports personality brings problem as well as benefit. Do you think that being celebrity bring more benefit or more problems?
Nowadays everyone wants to become famous personality or celebrity for the world. But being celebrity brings both positive and negative impact. With this essay i will discuss both pros and cons of being famous celebrity.
First of all, If you are sports person or famous celebrity the fame follows you wherever you go. Famous people live lavish life and they have all the money of the world. These stars are ideal of young generation and everyone wants to become like them.
On the other hand, If I talk about the negative impact.Famous people rarely have there personal like because of media interference the there life. They don't even get sufficient time to spent with there family and loved ones because of there busy schedule . Sports persons carries the pride of country with them and if they fail at any given point people are always ready to throw the stone on them.
In conclusion its not easy to become famous and carry out your routine work but famous people always think about young generation who follow them before doing anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84916201117 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2024116972 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8524030735 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158632187069 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709842826431 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779192511717 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982085758962 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675022901743 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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