One should only use enough money to fulfil their needs and rest should be given to the needy. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Money plays a significant role in our life, without money we cannot survive our life and fulfil our basic needs like food, shelter, clothes. In the current time of technological advancement, the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic asserts that should people give money to the poor people; or not? I completely disagree with this statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the first and foremost reason is that why the people donate their money to the poor people as they are paying high taxes to the government for development in the country. It is the responsibility of the government that they should provide some facilities to the poor people so that they can fulfil their basic needs. Moreover, if people give money to the needy, they cannot fulfil their own wishes and dreams. A survey is conducted by the Hindustan Times where 90% of the people do not want to give their money to the poor people because they are paying taxes to the government but also want to fulfil their dreams.
Secondly, most of the people do not want to give money to the beggars because they think that if they give money to the poor people; it becomes a habit of the beggars to approach this money without any work. People think that every person can get a job and do work to fulfil their basic needs that is why they do not want to give money to them. A good illustration of this is India where 60% of the people are below the poverty line because they do not want to do any type of work.
As we have seen that there are a number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that it is the responsibility of both government and individual that they should provide some money and facilities to the poor people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... do not want to do any type of work. As we have seen that there are a number of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56832298137 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.411276202 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4072153898 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164777593064 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746222518295 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451111306269 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107949399713 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350929864233 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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