The given bar chart highlights the number of household chores which is based on gender in Great Britain and it also reports minutes per person per day.
As an initial clear point, the males prefer gardening over any other task, and dislike performing clothes washing the most. Not only is this point clear, but also women love cooking the most, while maintenance is their least Favorite household job.
The first specific detail of note is that women more than double the men in cooking with a 74 to 30 minute difference. Another important detail is that the women do the cleaning for about 45 minutes more than the men. Next, with the gardening, the men perform this task for around 49.5 minutes and the women for less than half of this number, at 21 minutes.
With the care of children, women far exceed the men in this area by 45 minutes each day. Beside this point the men do maintenance almost three times more than the women. On a final note, the women spend 25 minutes a day washing clothes, while the man only use 2 minutes to do this.
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- The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54210526316 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1391289293 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8174242293 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906506119502 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410408054203 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586102696964 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720850406022 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715953612989 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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