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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.
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Given is the diagram illustrating how coffee is produced. It is clear from the picture that the production goes through eleven procedures before coffee is ready for sale on the market. More specifically, the first stage is the picking of coffee beans, and the process finishes at the packing stage.
Looking at the coffee production in detail, the process commences with coffee beans being harvested and dried under the sun. After that, the dried beans are roasted and then cooled rapidly, followed by the grinding step where coffee beans ...
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Sentence: It is clear from the picture that the production goes through evelen procedures before coffee is ready for sale on the market.
Error: evelen Suggestion: eleven
Sentence: Next, people strain the mixture which is freezed at the eighth stage in the process.
Error: freezed Suggestion: No alternate word
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