Some people say zoos should be banned because of being cruel to animals. Others say they should continue because they can protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether or not zoos should be prohibited. While zoos sometimes may badly treat animals, I believe that they can effort to conserve endangered species.
One the one hand, in some zoos animals are preserving in non-standard cages. Indeed, providing adequate enclosures for large animals such as elephants and giraffes is very expensive and in practice it is impossible. For instance, in our city zoo, an elephant is placed in a small enclosure, there are no trees and no other elephants. Therefore, this elephant seems bored and certainly would have shorter life span. Moreover, regarding expenses, zoos are not able to provide enough space for all animals in their captive environment. For example, eagles cannot fly in any kinds of enclosures. Hence, these animals would not have suitable circumstances similar to their habitat.
On the other hand, I would argue that zoos seem to be crucial for conserving the species that are susceptible to become extinct. For example, giant panda is one the most well-known endangered species that is protecting in zoos across the world. Zoos not only provide an appropriate enclosure for them, but also they implement a human-controlled breeding situation for pandas to increase their population. Moreover, deforestation as a legacy of increasing human population leads to disappearing animal’s natural habitat. Therefore, conserving animals in zoos in one of the bests ways to save species from extinction.
In conclusion, although some people think that zoos should be forbidden, I believe that they are worthwhile to save endangered species from extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People have different views about whether or not zoos should be prohibited. While zoos s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41796875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99133830557 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5470372076 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167896993352 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598101059879 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716209864967 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147394881884 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909150222178 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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