"Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree
with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Change, is always good. But only when it is controlled. Or at least, studied first. The problem with the duo of Claim-Reason provided is not just the attempt of applying the wrong formula to the wrong issue, but the blatant inconsideration of the interests of the enterprise as a whole. Choosing the limit of 5 years for a leadership, based on an incompletely quoted reason seems like an advise by a street Baba that you knock on the door five times to have a good luck.
Let's take them separately, starting with the reason quoted. As said earlier, change is good. A business, is a relationship be...
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Error: revitalisation Suggestion: revitalization
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