Jobs are an important aspect for a person's life. It provides security,means of livelihood and helps to achieve goals and dreams. Some people think that holding the same jobs for decades are satisfying and gives them an overall happiness for the service that they provide to the same company. In my opinion ,changing jobs from time to time helps us for the reasons of job security,further growth in a field we have studied for and also helps us to take leaps of faith to further our careers.
Job security is very important and we all want to be able to perform our best in a very relaxed atmosphere. This is because we are so used to the norms of the company and do not want to change . for example , my friend worked as a doctor for the same hospital for 30 years. He knew each patients well but the work become monotonous.On the other hand, it does not help to give our best in a challenging situation and we become threatened and depressed when there is a slight change in what we do routinely.
Growth in career in as much important as job security. Everyone like to step up the ladder of success in their career and the profession they have dedicated themselves to. for example, a junior doctor will one day want to be a senior doctor in the institution that he works in. This can be achieved only if we are able to take challenging work and thus bring growth into our careers in the long run.
Furthermore changing jobs from time to time helps the employers recognize the value of the person. He is available to take new challenges and thus upgrade his profession and career. This enables to be more vibrant and not stagnant at the same job for years and years. He is able to get diverse experience from a number of different companies and thus able to incorporate that in his new company.
In conclusion,I would always prefer changing jobs from time to time to enjoy a life of new experiences,new friends and a higher rate of growth in the career for which I have worked hard for.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47252747253 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61834750884 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9614384172 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23851293708 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792452869386 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776721596025 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142160955401 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692726676813 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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