you recently lose your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
how important the licence is to you
asking how she found it
saying how you would love to thank him/her
Dear Marry,
I am John Smith who lose the driving licence last week. After meeting my client on Tuesday 2nd march I came back my company and then I recognized that I lose my pocket with all things inside. I can not remember how did it happen. If you don not mind, could you tell me where you found it?
I was terribly worry about my careless until you gave it back to me. My career was had to continuous transfer because I am an real estate consultant. assuredly, I can not drive my car without my driving licence. You know as well as it take not only a long time to remake the new licence but also adverse effect to my job.
Without your support, can not imagine how many trouble I will meet in this time. Thank you from a bottom of my heart for your kindness.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worried'.
Suggestion: worried
... me where you found it? I was terribly worry about my careless until you gave it bac...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...had to continuous transfer because I am an real estate consultant. assuredly, I ca...
^^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Assuredly
...because I am an real estate consultant. assuredly, I can not drive my car without my driv...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun trouble seems to be countable; consider using: 'many troubles'.
Suggestion: many troubles
...thout your support, can not imagine how many trouble I will meet in this time. Thank you fro...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21568627451 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19557261526 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705882352941 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.916236967 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6363636364 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233630612646 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908683576832 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609601967768 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170414859373 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520809907101 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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