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In many countries, the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Do you think its is a positive or negative change to the society.
From the evidences of both rich and poor countries, the trends toward fewer children and more senior inhabitants are proceeding at an accelerated pace. Some people say that longer life expectancy of human means that they are having better living standards and it is a possitive tendency, however others claim that it would cause some serious problems to the community. From my point of view, i am of mixed opinion on this.
First of all, it is believed that the ageing of a socitey leads to a shrinking workforce as well as a lack of wealth available to sustain the retired population. Only when th...
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Sentence: Some people say that longer life expectancy of human means that they are having better living standards and it is a possitive tendency, however others claim that it would cause some serious problems to the community.
Error: possitive Suggestion: positive
Sentence: First of all, it is believed that the ageing of a socitey leads to a shrinking workforce as well as a lack of wealth available to sustain the retired population.
Error: socitey Suggestion: society
Sentence: A worker with decades - long working lives, for instance, could be seen as an admirable mentor for young workforce of a company for his safcifice and faithfulness.
Error: safcifice Suggestion: sacrifice
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