Gordan Act re-authorization, needs to be temporarily suspended until there are valid evidences to vindicate it from the accusation of the decline of dappled grackle population. Logging was given as the sole reason for the reduction of bird population in Big Dark Swamp. No other proper evidences are provided to prove this statement.
Firstly, to consider, though logging was allowed in Big Dark Swamp, cutting of old growth trees was prohibited. The birds generally build their habitats or nests on trees of larger heights so that they will be far from their preys on the ground. If this fact is to be considered, old grown trees are of larger heights than the trees which are cut down. So these birds primarily rest on the old grown trees than the trees that are cut down. It thereby proves that logging was not a proper reason for the diminishing population of birds.
Secondly, given that dappled grackle population has continued to decline since the passage of the law. This need not imply that the law was the reason for the reduction of the population because, there was no decrease in the population of other birds. The reason for the decline may be the birds flying out to different places during that season, the changed climatic conditions etc.
Finally, comparing the situations in Wayne County Marsh with that of the Big Dark Swamp may not be an optimal way. The climatic conditions of the place, the previous population of dappled grackle, other wildlife in that place also needs to be considered. There may be more compelling climatic conditions for dappled grackle in Wayne County Marsh than that of Big Dark Swamp this may be notable reason for the constant population of dappled grackle there.
Considering few of the factors mentioned above, we can clearly vindicate Gordan Act from the accusations of the declining populations of dappled grackle.But also as a coin has both sides, there may also be certain mistakes in properly executing this act which may at times affect the population. So the authorities need to take care to properly execute this act and thereby preserve the population of dappled grackle and other birds in Big Dark Swamp.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 367 350
No. of Characters: 1766 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.377 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.812 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.533 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.642 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.37 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.619 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...eclining populations of dappled grackle.But also as a coin has both sides, there ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94808743169 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62379454781 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44262295082 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5892581937 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1875 119.503703932 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181681588178 0.218282227539 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701614701938 0.0743258471296 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522011047592 0.0701772020484 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106197271632 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502710538062 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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