The illustrations reveal the phases of the life of a lady bug and its parts on its adult form. It is clearly seen that the life cycle of the bug evolves around 4 stages and its full grown bug has 8 major distinguishing parts.
Initially, eggs are laid by an adult bug in leaves of different trees. These eggs are left for 2 to 5 days and afterwards these will hatch and larvas will emerge. The larval stage lasts for 21 days and theses larvas will attach themselves under the leaves of trees and will form a cocoon like structure which is known as the pupa stage that lasts for 7 days. When the pupa is ready, an adult lady bug comes off of it and the cycle begins again.
Subsequently, adult lady bugs have 8 major parts that differentiate them from other insects. It has a round head with 2 eyes and 2 antennas. The pronotom, a part after the head serves as a connection of the head to the body and it has 2 white spots on it. Moreover, it has 6 legs, 2 in front, in the middle and at the back. And finally, its body is its abdomen and above it are 2 wings with red elytra and black spots.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and above it are 2 wings with red elytra and black spots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14018691589 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30981076799 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3048641944 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5454545455 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115267490872 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044979116061 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626039106994 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857836016397 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652875715338 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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