During a decade our life has changed dramatically and some people think that today we have a lot of opportunities to do what we want.I agree with them,because now a person can have a variety of options.In this essay I will express my opinion and provide some examples.
First of all,today young people can choose enter university or not.In fact,it was always,however,in the past people without any education background could not apply for a job.Fortunately,now a lot of people work from home and no one can prohibit them to work in such way.
Secondly,nowadays,we can buy what we want.Before in some countries the government banned to buy a lot of cars especially expensive one ,if you did it you should explain where you got money for the car.What if more,we can afford to travel around the world by any transport as plane or train.A long ago,it was some challenge,because some countries did not have any relationship as now and a lot of railways have been built.Subsequetly,you can just come to tourist agencies where they can give some advise.
On the other hand,most of people overuse these choices.It means that they became too free and undercontroled especially teenagers.To illustrate,some of them start lead a wild life as drinking,smoking and other violent actions.In my opinion,the government and parents should take control of them.
To sum up,nowadays,many students can enter an university and do not take the exams or acquire what we want and we have to take advantage from them in order to use our choices correctly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in fact, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01960784314 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47256175195 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.044518953 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.0 106.682146367 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.6 7.06120827912 306% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263159155437 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137865557112 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691839718835 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137865557112 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691839718835 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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