Some people say that all young people should have full time education until they are 18 years old To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Education is the stem of ones professional and personal life; without this, no one can grow holistically. Education must be mandatory for juveniles but whether should it be full-time or not is under fancy debate. One school of thought advocates full-time education for under-eighteen students which sounds awful to me.

Among the plethora of reasons, first and foremost reason for having a different opinion is that full-time study is an extreme side of the phenomenon; it can put pressure on adolescents' brain, and can lead to mental disorders. Copious accredited scientific researches are evide...

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Votes
Average: 9.8 (6 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Education is the stem of ones professional and personal life; without...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... solitary factor that gives leverage to ones career but there are abundant other fac...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es studies, for their overall progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20661157025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89361911681 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3511214519 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207492781509 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619192024237 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383837178118 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113311262879 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393433489887 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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