Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until theyou are 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Education is the backbone of every society. A few people think that youngsters should study full-time until the age of 18 .However, I disagree with this view .
There are plethora of reasons for this phenomenon. First and foremost, if they study full-time, they may suffer from stress which may retard their physical as well as intellectual growth. Secondly , young people cannot pursue extra curricular activities like sports, dancing due to shortage of time but these activities are necessary for the development of a person. Moreover, if they just stick to study then they do not realise the value of other things like their family, friends and they do not learn how to be socialise.
On the other hand, until the age of 18 , people come to know about their interest, so that they can choose their career after this age . Moreover , people study full-time, they are more likely not to engaged in bad activities as they do not have time for these activities like they will not go in wrong company but if they stay free they may engage in bad activities . In this age, they should work hard to be successful in their later life . However, in this age , children learn the virtues of life which makes their beliefs for their entire life. So if people study full-time , they may left behind in other activities.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that this phenomenon has several advantages but still I assert that young people should study part time until the age of 18.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90452261307 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47882645758 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0977826506 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20002542732 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895827635145 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737323512092 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156688261822 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584612879129 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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