Dear Sir or Madam,
My friends and I rent one of your properties and I am writing to inform you of some issues that we are having.
The house we are renting in has four bedrooms and there are three of us sharing it. Our rent was recently increased and, as we are all students, it is a little difficult for us to afford. It's a very nice house that suits us perfectly but at the moment some repairs are needed. The upstairs shower seems to be leaking in to the kitchen below and as a result, some of our groceries stored in the cabinets were spoiled. We are also worried as there is no front gate which makes the house less secure.
We would be grateful if you get the problems fixed as soon as possible. Finally, we would like to ask if it is possible to invite a friend of ours to share the rent and occupy the spare bedroom.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your's faithfully,
Jonathon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...is a little difficult for us to afford. Its a very nice house that suits us perfect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2774566474 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25035961872 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0977207237 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222329910263 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086353565099 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724193430456 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135297129758 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579364103762 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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