Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can government do to help?
Many individuals are not aware that there is an increasing number of waste being produced by human beings each year. This becomes a severe environmental issue which requires measures to be taken.
Growing population is one of the reasons. We have more people live on the planet than in the past centuries. As a result, we consume much more resources and produce more waste. Also, having a modern lifestyle is another cause. People would like to use plastic bags and purchase processed food, such as canned food, for their convenience. The plastics and the packaging of processed products are difficult to be disposed of. Thus, more garbage is generated years by years. What makes the situation worse is we do not have an effective recycling technology to reduce the rubbish. There is an enormous amount of waste cannot be recycled for second use; therefore, we suffer from more rubbish be exposed to the environment.
In my opinion, there are multiple ways to reduce the waste. Firstly, although it is difficult to control the population, governments can manage the increasing consumption by placing extra taxes on purchasing packaged products and using plastic bags. People who try to avoid high taxation would be willing to give up on convenience and change their lifestyle by buying fresh food and bring their own bags to carry shopping home. Secondly, governments have responsibilities to raise public awareness. Issuing press release and journals is an effective way to advocate individuals to take actions. Thirdly, governments can invest in improving recycling system to transit more waste into items can be re-used.
Overall, having an advanced technology to recycle and enhancing individual awareness can feasibly minimize the waste generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28113879004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81958353151 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4980662944 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212356793833 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633416409742 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721719649817 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104876201896 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861713418852 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.