Children are our societies future professionals. Therefore, they must develop in the fields that they are good at, and, at the same time, look out for all kinds of social interests.
Firstly, I believe that in order for newer generations to flourish their best, they should learn in schools that allows them to try different competences and let them choose what is best for them. When kids with a vast range of capacities share a classroom, learning can become much more effective and even fun! Little ones can benefit from healthy competitiveness and form work teams that will give them skills for their future as leaders. They say that two heads think more than one, so children with different abilities that interact together can derive in greater ideas.
Secondly, since we live in a multicultural and variate society, we all should learn how to coexist with each other. I agree with the fact that kids should learn in an open environment where they can relate to all sorts of economical, religious and racial backgrounds. We all have the same value as human beings, no matter where we come from. Boys and girls should be thought to respect other ways of thinking. Treasure this respect will lead our nations and communities to a better understanding and agreements to follow. Hence, we will create not only intellectual pioneers, but emotionally intelligent people.
Youngsters need to be prepared for making the right decisions for our future. Therefore, ensuring their teachings in a mixed surrounding is the best option.
- Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- When schools do not have enough funding or teachers, some people think physical education classes should be cut, while others believe that courses in art and music should be eliminated first. Which do you think is preferable, and why? 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. 60
- Globalization 76
- Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why? 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...learn how to coexist with each other. I agree with the fact that kids should learn in an open environmen...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, but emotionally intelligent people. Youngsters need to be prepared for makin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03137254902 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72241044787 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2707719855 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169122638666 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517531084014 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294120334533 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917511809064 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209886187188 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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