Write a letter to your English speaking friend about a movie that you are planning to watch. Please say
- What is special about this movie?
- How is it related to your friend?
- Suggest an arrangement to see this movie together.
Dear Anne,
It's been a long time since the last time we met each other. This week the new film of steven spielberg is going to be released in cinema. The movie is based on the book which is written by Jane Ruth and what's more fascinating about this movie is the astonishing play of george clooney who stars in a different role this time as a handicap person. As you may know the film was nominated for the best director and music in Can festival so as a result the movie is well worth seeing.
On the other hand, I thought it may help you with your thesis. As I remember it was about the effects of films and their music on audiences. In my opinion the music of this movie is perfect and it's relevant to your study and research. Besides, it would be a good chance for us to meet.
Last not least, let me know if you are interested in watching the movie and spending some time with me. Please don't hesitate to call me on my cell phone at any time. As soon as you inform me about the time which is good for you I'll reserve the tickets via internet.
Look forward to hearing from you
Rahi
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flaws:
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 206 200
No. of Characters: 820 1000
No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.788 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.981 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.057 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 38 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 27 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.759 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.156 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4