129.A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
Nowadays doing research is one of the most important parts of each university and even country. Certainly, a country will be beneficiary of researches that is taken place on that area. So that, most of officials in a country try to lead researches to some ways which society needs to that, in this way university researchers and country officials can make a better land. Regarding to situation of each country working in a especial area of research is preferable. Generally, some people prefer to work on natural matters and basic issues like agriculture, On the other hand majority of people have a tendency to working on some new and important matters like business researches. In my judgment, having a center of business researches is wise. Because, there are lots of centers for agricultural researches but business research is not developed as much as others. Also, entering to international markets we have to be familiar with a variety of things which can be provided by researchers in research center.
The main reason, for supporting development of business researches center is the lake of this center among others. All in all, each of research areas have some center in my country but business research is not improved as well as others. This problem have led our society to lots of severe problems in all aspects of economical activities. For example, I remember last year, in a television program I was watching the problems is selling products of agriculture, industry, and even petroleum. I realized that, in our country we do all things in the best way but because of lake of knowledge in business part we cannot gain more profit and we loos our resources. Therefore, I am convinced that we should invest on business researches.
Second reason is entering to international markets. Having a business research center we can become aware of world's need. No doubt, just concentrating on production is no worth, we should find a way to export our production such as agricultural production, industry's production to other lands and import money. As an instance, two years ago when I was university student in Berlin, Germany, I had a professor. Once he said me, you have lots of resource in your country, Iran but you just sell them. He said my countries officials after a while buy some materials which is made buy our own resource with a high price. When I think it seems foolish, but it is the reality. Thus, I think if we do not have a good business research center we cannot enter to internationals markets and might we loos our economy in several years.
In my opinion, developing a business research center is the best one. Because in this way we can compensate our lake of knowledge in this area. In addition we can be aware of other societies' needs and enter to international markets. Today's world is advanced more than enough, So that we do not need to extra research on basic matters, we should focus on making more profit and value for our country.
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researches that is taken place on that area.
researches that are taken place on that area.
Sentence: He said my countries officials after a while buy some materials which is made buy our own resource with a high price.
Suggestion: buy some materials which are made byour own
Sentence: Thus, I think if we do not have a good business research center we cannot enter to internationals markets and might we loos our economy in several years.
Error: loos Suggestion: lose
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