Dear Sir or Madam,
I feel the need to bring to your knowledge the recent situation that has degraded the quality of living in the Vincent neighbourhood and the conditions are appalling. Allow me to elaborate on the details.
I have been living in the neighbourhood now for almost a decade and the local council has never acted so inefficiently towards an issue which is laid bare in front of the entire community and the council is ignoring it. As you know that the neighbourhood was undergoing the road repair and maintenance work, since last 2 months and was completed last week. It is to my dismay that the council has not cleaned the residue which had accumulated due to the maintenance.
Moreover, the stormy weather has already begun and the weather alerts have started to show up on the television. It was only yesterday that due to high wind speed the dirt which had percolated in the vicinity had reduced the visibility to zero. Further, many residents had broken glasses due to the stones flying off to their windows and breaking them.
I request you to act on the issue promptly by cleaning the residue that has been left behind by the contractors and empathize with our situation because if the issue is not sorted out the result could be devastating and jeopardize with the safety of the people. I hope for a prompt action on your end.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74485596708 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66277722756 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59670781893 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8269269704 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.818181818 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156734364676 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590056478747 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057477007332 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754632580486 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321168381468 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.