some people think that only the society should be blamed for any anti_social activities.what are the causes for these activities?who is rrsponsible for them?
It is undoubtedly the case that is society are responsible for anti-social activity or not?which is also affecting the society adversly. In this essay, I will exomine the some possible reasons for this trend and suggest some practical policies that authorities and parents could imlement to reuce this problem.
The first step is to understand why is this happening? Broadly speaking, there are some reasons for this. The first and forrmost is uneducated.there are number of youngstars uneducated, because the have no enough money to spend on their study. That person have no idea for what the anti-social activities. those person behaviour very ruffly to other individuals. those human crete violence in the society;that's why number of other people distub the that activities.In addition to this, unemployment is also major reason. Because rich people spend lot of money in the study, but after comleted the higher degree courses while they face money problem after that, In the depression they choice the drug and alcohol it bad effect on there heath.
one of think which is spring on my mind that is , social media. All humans are addicted the mobile phones, and they are used number of websites.90/ people used the porn websites ,it is also effect the health. children also used the porn websites,they are also effects on their study and health. moreover, some times student under the mently pressure , because parents always told him why you are not join the job. that's why number of youngstars join the bad company than they can face many problem; increase the crime with the passive of time l.
there are variety of different factor that have led do make problem worse while it may not be possible do find a complete conclusion of this question, this could probably be solved by should government implement some new lows;they can be help to reduce the anti-social activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, broadly speaking, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03833865815 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6521524889 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1870876596 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209903109629 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773631836349 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962180952877 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133117806081 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678538052315 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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