A child of today is man of tomorrow. Now adays, the number of professionals such as doctors , teachers, engineers are increasing in there poorer countries. However, Government have limited number of jobs given to professionals.Apart from that, poorer countries have not been good enviornment and other opportunities.While, in the development countries, they gave more opportunities and more good jobs provides to professtionals.Although, many professionals are settle in there. Moreover , they get the handsome salaries.On the other hand, in the poorer nations have soaring educated people , but employment has been decreased.One of the most reasons is that many nations population has gradually rise.Corruption and dishonesty is also rising in some nations.
- The percentage of school-aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010 22
- TOPIC An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries What problems does this cause What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation 72
- TOPIC: An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation? 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Although
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, while, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 110.0 315.596192385 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87272727273 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.02749186658 2.80592935109 144% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.355865774 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.5 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.75 7.06120827912 280% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133495735952 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876394856775 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974216033823 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133495735952 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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