Dear Mr.John,
This is to bring to your notice regarding beam internet connection issue in our region. I Sanjeev Kumar Chandhuri belong to Gowri Shanker colony have been a customer to your company since 5 years.Your service was good in the past, but from last 1 month residents in our area using beam internet are facing intermittent connection issues.
Firstly, We are facing login issues.We need to login with account details in your site for getting connected to internet. The web page is throwing unresponsive error while logging.Sometimes after successful connection it immediately gets disconnected.Secondly, due to frequent heavy winds the internet cables are getting damaged.
We are mostly software engineers in our place. We do work from home.Due to this internet problems we are unable to complete our work on time which impacts deliverable related to work.Some housewife's who work in data entry as part time job work from home are also unable to do work on time.
Is there any option of laying underground cables,so that cables would not get damaged due to winds.Could you please look into the issues mentioned and find out quick solution.
Yours Sincerely,
SKC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23560209424 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00107342619 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706806282723 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0921543677 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132131479152 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588726889731 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492765742424 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644226324965 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552868678971 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.