what are the advantages an disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented.
In today's fast paced life, new things are invented in this world at an exponential rate. Some like-minded people foster this thinking that there are many benefits by living in an era but some masses argue about this statement. I will elaborate both of the scenarios. The following paragraphs tend to highlight some conspicuous aspects on this issue.
To embark with, there is deluge of arguments in favor of stance but the most preponderent factor that needs to be considered that there are many merits for people those are living in an era where new things are daily invented. Individuals can enjoy the fast and advance services by living in modern society. Another key justification upholding this notion is that by this advance technology peoples can not only saves their time but also their life become fast owing to these innovations. Thus, these modern appliances plays a indispensible part in our life.
On the flip side, there are some demerits of living in an era. Thanks to new inventions, people become lazy and totally depend on machines this is not fine for the overall development of the country. Another key justification that cannot be put on the backburner is that new technology not only increase the pollution by spreading non-biodegradable substances in environment but also cause the extinction of many species. Therefore, there are many drawbacks of living in an era.
In conclusion, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that the advantages of living in era outweigh its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...advance technology peoples can not only saves their time but also their life become f...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ns. Thus, these modern appliances plays a indispensible part in our life. On t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09126984127 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88160548371 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563492063492 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.662958685 50.4703680194 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6923076923 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28329990944 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104239639668 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103067106021 0.071462118173 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166672830937 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420078791556 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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