Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes or violence increase. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Serious crimes need capital punishment so that the offender are unable to get involved in the crime in the future. However, If they want to stop the acts of violation in the future then it would be better to forget him and judge him for a change .
Overall, I agree with the fact that punishment is the way to avoid the crime to be increased and hence our lives become more secure. If the wrongdoer wants to be a good man and there is a particular financial or personal problem that led him to the wrong way, then it would be the nice option to forgive him and try to solve the problem he have. Although by this way, some bad man may become effective part of the society but some do not bring themselves to the right path because they are very much used to of it. The person that _ involved in the crime and never try to stop the law-breaking act should be punished in the extremely serious way. However, it totally depends on the nature of crime. Some crime led to a capital punishment and some may require a small penalty. The law-making institutions are responsible to bring the bad man to the right level of punishment that he deserves. If there is weak legislation to properly handle the offender, it may become our society less secure for the good man. The government should be the responsible authority to provide a secure and better state to live. Laws should be implemented and executed in the most proper way that do not allow the offender to commit violent acts or to break the law in any way and to any extent. To sum up, it is the responsibility of the state runner to stop people to involved in crime. It may be done through solving the problems of the people that led them to commit that violence act or by the punishment accordingly.
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Sentence: Serious crimes need capital punishment so that the offender are unable to get involved in the crime in the future.
Description: The fragment that the offender is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: Although by this way, some bad man may become effective part of the society but some do not bring themselves to the right path because they are very much used to of it.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to to and of
Sentence: To sum up, it is the responsibility of the state runner to stop people to involved in crime.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and involved
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