Dear Prof.Smith,
I am Vajira Kalupahana and passed out as Bsc degree holder for Computer Science at Colombo University in 2010. I did my final year research project in Big Data analysis under your supervision. I hope you do remember me now. Actually, I am writing this letter to request a reference letter from you to apply for a new job.
Currently, I am working as a Senior Software Engineer at ABC company. However, I had a dream to work at a globally recognized company. Recently, I have seen a vacancy at Google which exactly matching their requirements with my experience and qualifications. I believe that I have a high chance to be selected since I have done research on Big data analysis.
All applicant should apply with a reference letter, and it is mandatory. Your recommendation will be really valuable, and it will be an added advantages for me. According to the guideline of application, they pay high attention to the reference letter.
I hope you can provide a comprehensive recommendation about my academic work. Please specifically mention my Database management skills and Software development skills. In addition to that do not forget to include some soft skills of me.
I will come and collect the reference letter when it is available. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
V.K
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Prof.Smith, I am Vajira Kalupahana and passed o...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g Data analysis under your supervision. I hope you do remember me now. Actually, ...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...eally valuable, and it will be an added advantages for me. According to the guideline of a...
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Line 14, column 3, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...g from you soon. Your Sincerely, V.K
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09413327352 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1632659714 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8823529412 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1764705882 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201318979371 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635085440831 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806348506328 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106237102318 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085301977725 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.