Nowadays, tourists show great interest to visit museums and historical sites as compare to locals. This situation has numerous considerable reasons however, some solutions can be adopted to put on arrest to this situation.
First and foremost cause behind this tendency is lack of interest of locals as they are already familiar with their history and they find it unnecessary to visit such places.Being locals, many times they may have watched do that is a why only outsider come to such places to enhance their knowledge. Furthermore, to watch places related to history is on the hit list of tourists who are fascinated to see ancient sites. For instance, a survey conducted by an organisation named Promote Tourism reported that 70% of the tourist who come to visit Taj Mahal in Agra, are foreigners because of its popularity in worldwide. So, specifically many tourists visit historical buildings on different sites.
Nonetheless, there are some remedies to motivate local people to visit historical places. First of all, systematic and effective advertisement of such places should be there to aware people about the importance of such sites. Government can also play crucial role to tackle this condition by providing sufficient funds for advertisements which may boost locals interest in historical places Moreover, native people should be granted with discount on entry tickets which ultimately encourage them to explore nearby ancient sites. Special offer on special days such as festivals may also attract people toward such monuments.
To conclude, generally, tourist from other areas are seen on historical places whereas lacal people avoid to visit these sites because of many responsible factors that can be handle with above mentioned solutions.
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 61
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 22
- Task 2: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Being
...ind it unnecessary to visit such places.Being locals, many times they may have watche...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid visiting'.
Suggestion: avoid visiting
... historical places whereas lacal people avoid to visit these sites because of many responsible...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, so, whereas, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39711191336 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77867669845 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3509797836 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.909090909 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365632921289 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137592333858 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072394264183 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220385209819 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227249242917 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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