Dear John,
Although I came to Hanoi yesterday, the meeting of our customer had some problems. that is my mistake and I am extremely apologize about the convenience.
I had a date with partner company at 9 am to discuss about new product of our company and give them some test data of the sample. I can not believe that I spend two hours for coming that place from my hotel. The traffic jam was strongly terrible after heavy rain, taxi driver move slowly and carefully and in a hurry I forgot my document in taxi. I called for the taxi company immediately and they said that they will return it in three hours. Luckily, partner company gave me another date at 8 am and today is a sunny day, so I hope that we will have numerous advantage.
Faithfully,
Mary.
- the company you work for is opening a new branch in another country and you would like to work there. write a letter to your manager and saywhy are you suitable to work in that company?what job would you like to take in the new office?ask about the work t 80
- You are getting married soon. Write a letter to your friend from a different country and invite him/her to the wedding. In your letter– Describe your future wife/husband.– What will happen at the wedding?– Why do you want to invite him/her? 64
- Write a letter to a friend who is visiting your country for the first time Tell him the best time of the year to come What places they could visit Invite them to come to your house 71
- Your neighbour keeps his pet in the garden, which has caused some troubles to your life. write a letter to your neighbour. In the letter write:.who your and why you write this letter.explain the problems. give your suggestions on how to solve the problems 64
- You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:-Explain the important-Apologize for the situation-Suggest a new arrangement 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ting of our customer had some problems. that is my mistake and I am extremely apolog...
^^^^
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'apologized'.
Suggestion: apologized
.... that is my mistake and I am extremely apologize about the convenience. I had a date w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...n three hours. Luckily, partner company gave me another date at 8 am and today is a ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 622.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41134751773 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42661002128 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673758865248 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9016852596 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 4.34317383033 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11780221701 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041806679026 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462745924802 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791372953921 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401007613517 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.