Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I am writing to you after a considerable time and the letter is aimed to seek a favour from you. Allow me to elaborate.
As you know, I have been working for a charity organization for quite a while now. The organization has extended their area of practice and is now entering the African society to eradicate the problem of AIDS which has been increasing rapidly and has been a cause of concern in the organizations around the world. Thus, it is the appropriate time to come out and rescue our African friends.
Since we all are human beings we all have a moral duty towards all the other humans. They all deserve to live a dignified life and we all shall make an endeavour to provide them with the means to live to lead a better life without any disease. Therefore, I seek your assistance to host a fundraiser event in your locality. Further, I will supply you with the requisite information and I will make sure that some representatives of our organization are present at your event.
I am sure you would be contemplating about your role. But, never undermine yourself. If you remember, you were a president in the college days and have been successful in hosting several fundraising events. Thus, I request you to make appropriate arrangements and bring a local politician or celebrity like the good old days to help us gather some support in terms of money from your local neighbourhood.
I hope that you will be able to contribute to the best of your level. I will forever be grateful to you for the efforts that you are going to put in for the event.
I wish you all the very best for the event.
Best wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...out and rescue our African friends. Since we all are human beings we all have a m...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u are going to put in for the event. I wish you all the very best for the even...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 309.0 206.0 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55663430421 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70487055399 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 290.88556701 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6955536393 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1631159294 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052879957924 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583566384789 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962762576799 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357465440383 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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