People in many countries have to spend more and more time away from their home. Why is this? What are the effects on people themselves and their families?
It is true that people in many nations nowadays tend to spend less time with their families than in the past. This essay will discuss the main reasons and the effects that this problem causes
Work and personal interest are two main causes for being farer away from home. To commence, since the society has developed, more people have to find well- paid jobs and those careers usually force them to work full time in the centers of cities. Consequently,they don’t have time to gather with their families far away.
Another cause could be themselves.Individuals now have more conditions to experience new regions, such as some historical places and scenic destinations, which are very attractive, so they are more likely to travel personally than spend time at home with parents.
If people be far away from home for too long, there are dangerous consequences. They are very easy to suffer from stress of working because they don’t have anyone reliable to share their stories with. Moreover, this can lead to the shortage of family closeknit. As a result, unexpected conflicts seem to occur and it will be also more difficult for people to understand the value of a family.
To put everything in a nutshell, people are farer and farer away from home for personal reasons, which will cause dangerous consequences for their emotions and thoughts. Thus, people should balance their individual life to have more time with their families
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- THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS CHANGE IN PROPORTION OF GDP IN THREE AREAS IN A PARTICULAR COUNTRY BETWEEN 2000 AND 2O20 100
- The percentage of workers in a company graduated with science and art degree 87
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- The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...hose careers usually force them to work full time in the centers of cities. Consequently,...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...e in the centers of cities. Consequently,they don't have time to gather with the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Individuals
.... Another cause could be themselves.Individuals now have more conditions to experience ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, well, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75528532501 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579166666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7494394591 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452357744224 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176945158012 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861462394062 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264940656459 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694433005462 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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