Many people can be seen in shopping malls in their free time.
Why do they do so?
What is your opinion on this practice?
Shopping is an integral part of our social activities. The introductions of shopping malls have further incited more people to spend time and shop in large malls. Eventually, it is wise to assess this behaviour in the social, economic and environmental factors.
There are several reasons for this behaviour. First, the improvement in today’s transport system has increased mobility, which eventually enables more people to travel easily to shopping malls, either by car or by public transports. Secondly, malls are often designed to cater to all the customer’s needs in one place. The wide spectrum of product choices, ranging from food to clothes and even customer services, contributes to the growing tendency of locals to visit shopping malls during their leisure time. Most significantly, the large commercial centres stimulate socialization. Strolling around a mall with friends or families has become a popular practice, especially among youngsters who like to make use of all the activities most malls have to offer, such as the cinemas. Besides, the sprawling urbanization in many countries has led to a decline in the recreational land for the residents. Thus, shopping malls become their best place to relax.
To me, leisure time can be spent in numerous ways. Whether one should spend one’s free time in shopping malls remains a subjective topic. Shopping malls entail many benefits that make our lives more convenient. It is thus justifiable that the practice of shopping thrives in today’s socioeconomic world. Yet, it is also hard to overlook the escalating number of people going to commercial centres, often not to purchase goods but to simply kill their extra leisure time. This reflects the extent to which our society has turned inadequate in providing the citizens with the very basic element of life – a place to amuse. Retrospectively, people would spend their free time in various activities such as sport, clubs and family gatherings. Today, it is fair to argue that these choices have mostly been narrowed down to technology and shopping, particularly in developing and affluent nations.
Importantly, we should vary our leisure time to other activities, which will wholesomely contribute to our own well being. Yet, in a consumerist society, shopping in the commercial stores is an inevitable practice. That being said, I remain neutral to this form of entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... neutral to this form of entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3664921466 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98207412675 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599476439791 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.733462625 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247045995283 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069627594762 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465516416646 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148451746943 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521565059096 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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