You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about a problem that I have recently encountered with my laptop.
I own a Dell inspiron 1525 laptop under your company warranty which will expire next month. Three days ago, when I was working with the laptop, I noticed that it did not work properly and after that it turned off. I tried to fix it myself but I it did not turn on. So I decided to call to your shop and your customer service agent said he will call me back 1 hour later. However, now it is been 2 days and no one called and when I called no one take the responsibility for this problem.
I also should mention that as an independent computer programmer, this laptop is a vital piece of equipment for me and I need it for delivering my drastically important assessed data about a contract with an important client before next weekend.
I would be grateful if you send you technicians to check and repair my device as soon as possible and also I would like you to notify me about the schedule of this process by email.
I trust that you will give this matter your immediate attention
Yours faithfully,
Peter Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'laptop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'laptops'.
Suggestion: laptops
...y laptop. I own a Dell inspiron 1525 laptop under your company warranty which will ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e schedule of this process by email. I trust that you will give this matter yo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42654028436 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49107929771 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4394777087 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277386107174 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953105399333 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460228146556 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138426202581 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03279221536 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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