In the recent years, Environmental pollution has been one of the alarming concerns. The researchers apprise that it's consequences can be calamitous it the appropriate measures are not undertaken. In my opinion, the government can control the levels of pollution by restricting the each household to use of a single car, however, there are various other factors that can also be considered to overcome this problem.
The primary cause of pollution are the greenhouse gases emitted by humans, most of which are a result of combustion of fossil fuels in cars, factories, and electricity production. Other contributing factors are methane released from agriculture and the gases used for refrigeration. Deforestation has also resulted in the increase in the levels of carbon dioxide and cars in use by each household are largely responsible for the increment of Environmental problems.
To address this rapidly growing issue, the use of efficient modes of transport that utilize low carbon fuel must be promoted, while at the same time the efforts must be directed towards restricting the number of vehicles on the road. Furthermore, extensive use of renewable energy such as wind, geothermal, solar, and, bio-energy is another beneficial method to resolve this issue. Thus, we as individual should make a persistent effort to use efficient energy sources, especially at home.
This dissertation has enumerated the seriousness of the issue and least effort taken by the countries to solve it. Therefore, if the government fails to reduce the sources that lead to and aggravate the problem and we as individuals do not take the responsibility for the surrounding Environment around us, then it might worsen the problem to an irreversible extent.
- The diagrams below show how glass containers such as bottles, are produced and recycled. 56
- In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development. 61
- The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. SOme people think it would be better to our environment 56
- Factory farming is becoming a major revenue carcer in many countries.what are the advantages and disadvantage of factory farminG 61
- In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development. 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34181818182 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10951405946 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1680885594 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182251859707 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626575452802 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561272882376 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1035258238 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794314754012 0.0609392437508 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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