Everyday , life is changing and life goes on. According to this change, life conditions of us tend to quick changes. Some people hold the opinion that life has comfort and quality in today than when the time that their grandparents were children but some people have negative attitude on this statement. As far as, I am concerned, I agree with the statement that today life is more comfortable rahter then the time that my grandparents were children. My arguements for this point are listed as follows.
One of the of the primary reason is development of transportation. Today, everyone easly can go to the very distant places in small amount of times by cars, planes or high speed trains. For example, 5 year ago , I went to Usa from Istanbul,Turkey in 11 hours which mean 15000 kilometers. Morever, many people can go anywhere whenever they want due to wide variety of transportation types. On the other hand, my grandparents were children, they could not go to 15000 kilometers in 11 hours instead it lasts days or weeks because in that time the planes were not used and developed. If they decided to use cars, they had not any roads to drive. So, this situtation is very uncomfortable for them and they had a lot of difficulties in this kind of situations. If there were an emergency to go a distant hospital, they had very hard situations to transport the patient in these kind of rough occurances.
Another reasons why I agree with the above statement is that development of communication ways. In this time of the life, everyone can easly communicate eachother in everywhere and everytime by using smartphones or computers with their internet network. However, decades ago, when my grandparents were children, this change was not possible for them and this was effected their comfort very high levels. For instance, when someone went to another city from his home, he could not communicate with his family in everywhere or everytime because the cellphones and internet network were not invented in this time so he had to find a telephone center and maybe it could take time to find a telephone center. Thus, their comfort of life had been effected badly.
In a word, development of transportation and communication ways have made life easier and more comfortable than it was. Taking account of all these viewpoints, we can conclude that developments makes life easier and more comfortable but it takes too much time to development of these inventions and humanity work on it too much time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
Everyday , life is changing and life goes on. Ac...
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Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Everyday , life is changing and life goes on. Acco...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of the'.
Suggestion: of the
...his point are listed as follows. One of the of the primary reason is development of transp...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...gh speed trains. For example, 5 year ago , I went to Usa from Istanbul,Turkey in 1...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Turkey
...5 year ago , I went to Usa from Istanbul,Turkey in 11 hours which mean 15000 kilometers...
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Line 3, column 869, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... situations to transport the patient in these kind of rough occurances. Another reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88262910798 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86503478452 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6618703838 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207243990659 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699886485157 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712955691969 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14079211416 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073078109742 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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