"Prevention is better than cure."
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to
spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Metabolic diseases are on rise amongst people in many countries and this has led to a consequent increase in government spending in treating these diseases. With this backdrop, it is now suggested that an effective way to tackle this problem is to shift focus towards prevention of diseases through education of masses. I agree with this viewpoint as this empowers the citizens to take care of their own health.
Increased commercialization and changing working patterns have pushed people to adopt unhealthy eating habits and sedentary lifestyles. For example, a lot of people have disposable incomes which allow them the luxury of a car. This coupled with easy availability of highly processed foods, has led to an increase in Obesity, Diabetes and heart diseases incidences. As a result, the national healthcare systems are left grappling with treating ill people beyond their capacity and resources. the governments, therefore are put under unfair burden of allocating additional budgets to treat its ailing population.
However, using this same budget to educate people on making healthy choices can prove to be a better alternative. Most people lack enough knowledge to make sensible choices with related to food. Government can divert its resources of doctors and dieticians to create awareness in households through education of children and families. Further, developing infrastructure such as cycling lanes or public sports centers and jogging parks can motivate people to become more active. Physical activity is known to help prevent metabolic disease development. This, increase in activity along with knowledge of healthy eating habits can be effective in preventing health problems.
To conclude, I agree, that investing in health education and preventive measures will lessen the burden on state health care systems and prove to be more beneficial strategy in long- run with regards to health of population.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- “Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood”. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 73
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...le beyond their capacity and resources. the governments, therefore are put under un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48657718121 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87644970138 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6159649455 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196300438387 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647758126114 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607262395683 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129384475637 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565343787714 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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